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  • LacanoodleMtoOC PoetryMoored
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    2 months ago

    Graf vision here. Good rhythm, the structure is musical. Succinct and quite evocative. I like it.

    I would only question if you meant deliberate? And if you would like to go with adrifts or adrift?