@originalpoetry Finally Done
My journey has been long.
My fever dream is finally over.
Done, is the pain and suffering.

Yet still I feel stuck in this dream.
My feet are still wet with the mud of the path.
Is this journey really over; finally over and done?

Stuck in the perpetual nightmare.
Long is the journey of pain and suffering.
Have I made this journey or is this yet a delusion?

Nay, my journey is done and gone.
Time to shake off the mud from my boots.
Leave behind the pain of the past—I’m finally done.

  • LacanoodleM
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    3 months ago

    Very nice.

    My feet are still wet with the mud of the path is brilliant. Very tactile and love the flow of the sentence