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OC Poetry · 5 days ago

Indifferent to the Lighting

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Indifferent to the Lighting

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OC Poetry · 5 days ago

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Unknown unsaids
coil around my heart,
injecting censures —
Indifferent to the lighting

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By the writing style I presume you are dnxqt on a different account? Good stuff again.
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  Haha no that’s not me. Though this comment made me check out their poem Moored for the first time. I like the imagery. Thank you again.

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