The floating… hat? is distracting quite a lot from the actual comic, I can’t help but wonder what it is and why.
Nice comic tho!
Thanks! This is the first feedback I received regarding the floating hat. I’ve been using it in a couple of comics in the last 1-2 years but maybe I’ve drawn it too floaty here.
I really like hats of the floaty kind, though. Being a comic artist is tough.
I assume you’re very used to seeing it so you kinda tune it out but to me it’s what I focus on here because it’s unusual and sticks out a lot.
I think maybe the fact that it seems like it’s the bun wearing the hat rather than the person makes it even more distracting, it’s is indeed very floaty in this one.
I don’t find it as distracting in the Willem Dafoe bird comic.
Makes sense. I will pay extra attention how the hat is placed next time and hopefully it will be clearer for the viewers.
Keep it up, I like your art style :)
